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I don't know what is happening in this video. I wish the first 20 seconds spent on opening logos were instead utilized to clarify anything. But the presentation ain't half bad.

elseven responds:

context: I have an animated series called the robot la cer, in that series there is a character called Mr Jonn who is the owner of one of the many cities in the world of squares, in that series Mr Jonn is shown with objects that do not They exist in that universe, and this little animation titled "the mysterious life of Mr Jonn" shows how Mr Jonn obtained all those things

FUCK YEAH, FRONTPAGED! Killer job, dude. Can't wait to see what you (we?) do next year.

This rocks holy shit!! The camera moves are really fun

Fun animation and voice acting but the pacing definitely needs to be snappier I think? It kind of slugs along

The description is one million percent AI-generated. Are the jokes AI-gen too?

RogersEntertainment responds:

Um nope lol

You never learm do you

Kelsland responds:

Learn about what?

I gotta know if this is actually stop motion, because if it is, holy SHIT, your sets look clean as fuck

This rocks dude, good job. The effects, like the putty and straw for the muzzle flash, are really creative. Can't wait to see more!

I really need more of this lmao, if this was like 20 seconds long I'd send it to everyone (I'll still send it to people but this has great joke-mv potential)

Okay, listen. I understand that because of the success of Helluva Boss and Amazing Digital Circus anyone and their mother thinks they can make a pilot. I sincerely need you to understand this is not a pilot, it's actually a short, due to the fact that it doesn't really suggest a good stepping-on point for an ongoing series in any capacity.

You have proposed one plot point, the whole thing about this egg granting wishes — which, at the end of the day, it didn't even succeed in due to the fact that the initial plot point was just completely obliterated as soon as licensed anime character entered.

Speaking of characters, there is not a single character original to this "pilot", as the cast is made up entirely of your self-insert, your snake girl OC from your previous TikTokkery who only appeared for 5 seconds at the end, and various characters bolstered with a dose of AI text-to-speech.

Except for the egg. That goddamn egg. Where'd you even come up with that lmao?

Kelsland responds:

Well the show isn't really going to be about the beaver, it's going to be about the egg doing favors for different people and how they react, I called this a pilot to gauge interest and see if the concept was good. You seem to like the egg so I think it's a step in the right direction

Animator by day, animator also still by night.

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